Project 2 was pretty cool. If in the first draft, I deployed language to create an effect, in this, I analyzed and explored how other people manipulate certain elements to achieve variety of effects.
In the first draft, I focused on the bigger picture, trying to draw comparisons between my two chosen cities, that are honestly polar opposites. However, I eventually found a common thread between the two: both places stimulate freedom, but a type of freedom that is specific to each city. This helped me shape and structure the piece effectively. However, I realized after conferring with my professor and peers that I lacked the concrete details that help ground the piece and illustrate the more abstract concepts I mentioned in the first draft. In the second draft, I focused more on my descriptions and deliberated the images to include on the webpage to provide a more holistic and effective reading experience.
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